Re: please edit this
it sounds critical to the kid for no particular reason. "pedestrian statistics", and "Transferring is nothing new for Vassar, who played at four different high schools spread throughout the country in four years as a prep."
Honestly I don't know the kid at all since he played so little and I watched so rarely, but I don't like the tone of this. Sounds like 'good riddance he didn't perform and was likely to transfer anyway'
He's a 20 year old kid. Cut him some slack