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<blockquote data-quote="BobbyBoucheer" data-source="post: 129568348" data-attributes="member: 1416746">Neither one of these posts are ended with any punctuation.&nbsp; The sentence, &quot; Your diction in your 1st sentence is terrible. &quot; , is grammatically incorrect.&nbsp; It should read; The diction in your first sentence is terrible.&nbsp; The sentence, &quot; This is grammatical piece of Sh$t. &quot; , is also grammatically incorrect.&nbsp; It shouldread; This is a grammatical piece of ****.&nbsp; The last sentence of the first post is also grammatically incorrect.&nbsp; You did not use a comma where needed and you should have used no one instead of nobody.&nbsp; The second paragraph is prime example of grammatical errors.&nbsp; The opening sentence has no possessive noun.&nbsp; The word You was omitted twice which would have rendered the sentence acceptable.&nbsp; The last sentence of the second post is missing a comma between sentences and you.&nbsp; You should really clean up your adolescent use of the written word if you plan on critiquing others in the future.&nbsp; Yes?</blockquote>

[QUOTE="BobbyBoucheer, post: 129568348, member: 1416746"] Neither one of these posts are ended with any punctuation. The sentence, " [B][I]Your diction in your 1st sentence is terrible. [/I][/B]" , is grammatically incorrect. It should read; The diction in your first sentence is terrible. The sentence, "[B][I] This is grammatical piece of Sh$t. [/I][/B]" , is also grammatically incorrect. It should read; This is a grammatical piece of ****. The last sentence of the first post is also grammatically incorrect. You did not use a comma where needed and you should have used no one instead of nobody. The second paragraph is prime example of grammatical errors. The opening sentence has no possessive noun. The word [I]You [/I]was omitted twice which would have rendered the sentence acceptable. The last sentence of the second post is missing a comma between[I] sentences [/I]and[I] you[/I]. You should really clean up your adolescent use of the written word if you plan on critiquing others in the future. Yes? [/QUOTE]

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