Kivon Coman Article
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But it's this kind of thing:
That just makes me cringe. Really? I mean, it's not enough for him to play well. Not enough to have an interception. But a game-winning interception. Kid probably has a better chance of winning the lottery than having a game-winning interception against Bama and Auburn. It's the writing equivalent of saying, "don't be surprised if a few years from now monkeys fly out his *** and immediately type the works of Shakespeare." You seem hell bent to make a go at this and I want to support you but you got to get the writing under control.
Glad to see Coman pumped up though, I think he is a strong pull for us.
That just makes me cringe. Really? I mean, it's not enough for him to play well. Not enough to have an interception. But a game-winning interception. Kid probably has a better chance of winning the lottery than having a game-winning interception against Bama and Auburn. It's the writing equivalent of saying, "don't be surprised if a few years from now monkeys fly out his *** and immediately type the works of Shakespeare." You seem hell bent to make a go at this and I want to support you but you got to get the writing under control.
Glad to see Coman pumped up though, I think he is a strong pull for us.
Possibly. But it is more of a feature article and I did say in a few years, It's not like I said MSU would beat Bama next year. I really do believe this kid will make them regret their decision.Repeat Offender said:
I'm a lot of things but I ain't a homer. I normally try not to respond to this type of stuff. But you really need to get a life instead of agonizing over a few words in an article. Most people would glad that a kid is trying to prove his doubters wrong and wants to win a national title.<div>lars larson said:
</div><div>If I was a homer I would have put the extra stuff he said about Ole Miss in the article.
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Yea he may be main reason MSU is likely to get Beniquez. they seem very close. Coman will get a very high rating from me when I rate the class after signing day.Mutt the Hoople said:
<div style="border-collapse: collapse; font-family: Tahoma, Verdana, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; -webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 2px; -webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 2px; "><span class="Apple-style-span" style="border-collapse: collapse; font-family: Tahoma, Verdana, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; -webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 2px; -webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 2px; ">Let me remind you of your preseason NFL Draft projections for ...</span></div><div style="border-collapse: collapse; font-family: Tahoma, Verdana, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; -webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 2px; -webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 2px; "><span class="Apple-style-span" style="border-collapse: collapse; font-family: Tahoma, Verdana, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; -webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 2px; -webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 2px; ">
</span></div><span class="Apple-style-span" style="border-collapse: collapse; font-family: Tahoma, Verdana, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; -webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 2px; -webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 2px; ">Relf (5th to 7th round)</span><span class="Apple-style-span" style="border-collapse: collapse; font-family: Tahoma, Verdana, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; -webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 2px; -webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 2px; "><br style="min-width: 0px; "></span><span class="Apple-style-span" style="border-collapse: collapse; font-family: Tahoma, Verdana, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; -webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 2px; -webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 2px; ">Ballard (2nd to 4th)</span><span class="Apple-style-span" style="border-collapse: collapse; font-family: Tahoma, Verdana, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; -webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 2px; -webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 2px; "><br style="min-width: 0px; "></span><span class="Apple-style-span" style="border-collapse: collapse; font-family: Tahoma, Verdana, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; -webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 2px; -webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 2px; ">Saulsberry (3rd to 5th)</span><span class="Apple-style-span" style="border-collapse: collapse; font-family: Tahoma, Verdana, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; -webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 2px; -webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 2px; "><br style="min-width: 0px; "></span><span class="Apple-style-span" style="border-collapse: collapse; font-family: Tahoma, Verdana, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; -webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 2px; -webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 2px; ">A. Lawrence (3rd to 5th)</span><span class="Apple-style-span" style="border-collapse: collapse; font-family: Tahoma, Verdana, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; -webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 2px; -webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 2px; "><br style="min-width: 0px; "></span><span class="Apple-style-span" style="border-collapse: collapse; font-family: Tahoma, Verdana, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; -webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 2px; -webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 2px; ">F. Cox (Top 15)</span><span class="Apple-style-span" style="border-collapse: collapse; font-family: Tahoma, Verdana, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; -webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 2px; -webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 2px; "><br style="min-width: 0px; "></span><span class="Apple-style-span" style="border-collapse: collapse; font-family: Tahoma, Verdana, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; -webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 2px; -webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 2px; ">Maye ( 5th to Undrafted)</span><span class="Apple-style-span" style="border-collapse: collapse; font-family: Tahoma, Verdana, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; -webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 2px; -webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 2px; "><br style="min-width: 0px; "></span><span class="Apple-style-span" style="border-collapse: collapse; font-family: Tahoma, Verdana, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; -webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 2px; -webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 2px; ">Mitchell (4th to 7th)</span><div><span class="Apple-style-span" style="border-collapse: collapse; font-family: Tahoma, Verdana, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; -webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 2px; -webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 2px; ">
</span></div><div><span class="Apple-style-span" style="border-collapse: collapse; font-family: Tahoma, Verdana, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; -webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 2px; -webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 2px; ">You're right...Brandon Maye will be undrafted.</span></div><div><span class="Apple-style-span" style="border-collapse: collapse; font-family: Tahoma, Verdana, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; -webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 2px; -webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 2px; ">
</span></div><div><span class="Apple-style-span" style="border-collapse: collapse; font-family: Tahoma, Verdana, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; -webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 2px; -webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 2px; ">And too bad I can't find your preseason SEC position-by-position breakdown where you had pretty much every one our position groups in the top one or two for "Best Case Scenario".</span></div><div><span class="Apple-style-span" style="border-collapse: collapse; font-family: Tahoma, Verdana, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; -webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 2px; -webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 2px; ">
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None of these dicks would say a word to you to your face, but for some reason they turn into Gordon Ramsey when they get behind a keyboard. Internet cool I guess.
One piece of constructive criticism: I noticed a repetitive use of adjectives in most paragraphs (rangy safety, underrated safety, versatile safety, etc). Just my opinion, may want to keep similar phrases like that to a minimum.
One piece of constructive criticism: I noticed a repetitive use of adjectives in most paragraphs (rangy safety, underrated safety, versatile safety, etc). Just my opinion, may want to keep similar phrases like that to a minimum.
I'll take a note of that. I'm trying to keep from using a pronoun mostly but I will take that into account in my next article.MaleBovineK9 said:
Your ****'s not that bad. Not great, but not bad at all. Keep posting, it wouldn't be the same without your columns.