It's a good start and I liked it. Better than most of these ***-clowns could do anyway. If writing interests you, keep writing and it will get better with time.
And I liked the fact that you took a jab at Ole Miss in the first few entries.
not sure how to describe, its just everything,almost like it took literally hours to make and write<div>
</div><div>you've really got something there</div>